Wrong
She trusted him. He betrayed her.
Cap
Her signature beside the pen. Divorced.
Splendid
Life is better without that prick.
Cantankerous
He’s just a cantankerous, old fart.
Torn
Even still, she still loves him.
Unfurl
She misses him. Freedom is difficult.
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Written for Six on the Sixth.
As is my occasional style, these stories are individual chapters in a longer story, but I hope they stand on their own at the same time.
January 6th, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Uh oh..I don’t think I did this right
https://lingeringvisions.wordpress.com/2016/01/06/six-stories-on-the-sixth-day-of-the-first-month/
January 6th, 2016 at 7:36 PM
No worries, rules around here are mere suggestions. Your stories are still good. 🙂
January 7th, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Thanks Adam
January 6th, 2016 at 3:50 PM
I like how you connect all of yours. I try to do the same. Kind of fun that way. Hard to choose which is my favorite here. I think “Cap” is powerful. “Splendid” is funny. “Unfurl” makes my heart ache. Great choice of words!
January 6th, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Thanks. It’s always a challenge making a longer story out of them since I’m usually done with 3 or 4 before I even have any idea where I’m headed.
January 7th, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Same here. I usually write a few extra before I decide which ones I like best, and fit together correctly.
January 7th, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Well done, Adam. 🙂 — Suzanne
January 11th, 2016 at 11:58 PM
Jesus loves you